Title:DROWNED Author: Nichola Reilly Release Date: June 24, 2014 Pages: 304 Find it:Amazon|| Goodreads Genre: Fiction | YA | Fantasy
Coe is one of the few remaining teenagers on the island of Tides. Deformed and weak, she is constantly reminded that in a world where dry land dwindles at every high tide, she is not welcome. The only bright spot in her harsh and difficult life is the strong, capable Tiam—but love has long ago been forgotten by her society. The only priority is survival. Until the day their King falls ill, leaving no male heir to take his place. Unrest grows, and for reasons Coe cannot comprehend, she is invited into the privileged circle of royal aides. She soon learns that the dying royal is keeping a secret that will change their world forever. Is there an escape from the horrific nightmare that their island home has become? Coe must race to find the answers and save the people she cares about, before their world and everything they know is lost to the waters.
I write things on the sand so I won’t forget them. Things I like. Darkness. Dreams. Clam.
Things I want.
A warm dry place.
A long night of sound sleep.
I watch the waves come and erase the words from the shore. Erased from existence. From possibility. It’s almost as if the waves are taunting me.
For thousands of tides I am sure people thought about how and when the world would end. Maybe they wondered whether it would happen while they were alive, or if their children, grandchildren, or maybe even their great-greatgreat-great-grandchildren would be the unlucky ones to be there when the world crashed down around them. But I don’t have to wonder.
I know it is going to happen soon, and maybe in my lifetime.
Every morning I wonder if I will see the sunset. Every breeze is like death breathing down my back.
The sun burns like fire among black smokelike clouds on the horizon, making my eyes squint and burn. High tide is approaching, the waves slowly coming closer. With every breath, every heartbeat, they rise a little more. Soon almost everything will be underwater.
I stand and shake the sand out of my mat, then roll it up and affix it to my knapsack. I’ve gotten pretty good at doing all these things one-handed. My clothes are wet, and my lips taste like salt. I’m not sure why I’m yawning because I had a pretty good spell of sleep. Nearly half a tide. Half a tide where, at least in my mind, I was somewhere warm and dry, somewhere that didn’t smell like crap or rotting fish.
I plod along with the others, away from the steadily rising waters. It’s chilly but at least my tunic is only slightly damp; it doesn’t stick to my skin. Nothing is ever dry here. It’s either sopping wet or damp, and damp is a blessing.
It’s time once again for formation. We all know the tides. We must, or we’d pay for our ignorance with our lives. It’s time for all of us, all 496 of us, to trudge to the platform that stands maybe sixty of my feet above the ground, at the center of the island. At least, at last total, there were 496 of us. I don’t like to count because our numbers are constantly falling. We all know this, which is probably why nobody looks at or speaks to anyone else. Better not to get too familiar.
When someone disappears, we all assume the worst. Because the worst is usual.
The only person who does look at me is Mutter. His face is dark and leathery, and his beard is scraggly and foul, greenish-gray, filled with old, dead things. He has his own scribbler scars, but at least he has all his limbs. He is useful. He sneers at me, disgusted. “Waste of space,” he hisses as I find my spot on the platform. “Scribbler Bait.” I wipe away the sand with my bare foot. The number two is scratched there.Number two is my spot, for now. It’s near the dry center of the circular formation, where things are safer. There are 496 circles arranged around it, spiraling out from the center. The circles are small; there’s barely enough room to stand. There used to be thousands of circles, one for every person on the island. But the only thing constant about the island we call Tides is change.
Children get the central spots. When I reach my sixteenth Soft Season, when I am an adult, I will be given a new spot based on the importance of the job I am given. Mutter is right, though. I don’t have any special skills, and my deformity makes it difficult for me to pull in the nets or do the things fishermen do. I’d barely make a good scavenger, the lowest of the low. People call them Scribbler Bait.
“I saw a scribbler on the platform last night,” Xilia whispers to no one in particular. She is a scavenger, too, and quite mad. But many of those who occupy spaces on the outer edge of the formation are crazy, because they brush with death every time the tide comes in. And nobody can deny that the scribblers have been getting braver. That’s not the name we always had for them. When I was young they were called spearfish, because they’d often spear fishermen as they brought in the nets. But then they started coming onto the sand when the tides receded, sunning themselves. They’ll attack us on land, ripping through our flesh with their spear-shaped noses, then feasting on our blood. They’re getting smarter, too, because after a while they began burrowing under the sand, hiding from us, and springing out whenever a human came too close. They make long, winding paths in the sand with their sinewy black bodies—like scribbles, my father had said. My father started calling them scribblers, and everyone followed him, as they usually did.
I’ve never seen a scribbler on the platform before. The thought makes me shudder. The platform, however small and inadequate, is our safety. But I know our safety is eroding. It has always been so. A thousand tides ago, the platform was twice the size it is now at high tide. There was room for twice as many people. Now we are under five hundred. I know this because there are fewer than five hundred spaces. The largest number that’s still visible, though it is nearly half eaten by the tides, is 496. At least, that was the number the last time I had the energy to look.
I sigh and throw my things down on my spot. The spot is so comfortable and familiar to me that I feel as if the imprint on the stone conforms perfectly to my feet. Sweat drips from my chin. My eyes sting from the glare reflecting off the white concrete. Little Fern, who is seven, comes hopscotching up to space number one, scrawny as a sprig of seaweed, two white-blond braids framing her sweet smile. She has a little stick in her hand, something she’s never without. When she steps next to me, she touches the stick to my elbow. “Your wish is granted,” she says with great flourish.
If only. If only the stories I told her about fairies were true. There are so many things to wish for.
I was space number one until Fern turned five, when we all moved over a space to make room for her. Before then, she occupied the same spot as her mother, who was a fisherman before she died many tides ago. They used to give mothers spaces in the center of the formation when they had children, but then things became so dire that some women had babies just to get a better spot. I was told Tiam’s mother had, and my mother had, though I can’t remember ever squeezing next to her on her spot. Two babies in a season was a virtual baby boom. So they put an end to that practice after I was born. Now nobody has children. It just means more people. And there are already too many people.
After all, when a baby is born, it just means that when that child turns five, we’ll all have to move one space to the left. The person at the very end of the spiral is out of luck. Space is something people have been known to kill for.I’m grateful for Fern, though. She is the only one who still smiles at me. As for the others, we are not friends. We do not trust or like anyone, even our own family members—if we have any of them left, and most of us don’t. We all know what is coming, and we’ve all lost enough to know that caring for another person doesn’t make things easier.
Which means I have a big problem.
Just like part of the formation washes away in every tide, part of me is lost every time I hear his voice.
“Hi, Tiam,” I say, staring at the sandy ground. Looking up at him, at those liquid sapphire eyes, will just make the pain worse. Besides, I already have every inch of his face memorized. Him? If I hadn’t been required to assume the space next to him for the past ten thousand tides, if there weren’t slightly under five hundred of us, I doubt he’d know my name.
Fern waves her wand some more, granting wishes to the air. I wonder how obvious it is that most of the wishes I have in my head involve Tiam. It’s not that I want to wish about him. It just happens.
Tiam drops his stuff in space number three. For as long as I can remember, he has been beside me. When I was young he used to hold my hand to keep me from being scared. He is never scared.
I move as far away from him as I possibly can, which isn’t far enough. The spaces are only maybe two of my feet in diameter, so now that we are older, we rub shoulders. Even though I try to wash up every day in a tide pool, I know he can smell me. I have the luck of having the job that makes me reek a hundred times worse than the normal, forgettable stench that most of us carry. Mine seems to bury itself deep under my skin. No matter how much I bathe, it never completely goes away.
If he does smell me, though, he never lets on. In twenty tides or so he will reach adulthood, and I’m sure he will have a good spot in the formation. A spot for the most valuable people. He is smart enough to be a medic, strong enough to be a builder, brave enough to be an explorer. He is everything I am not.
Tiam always comes to the formation at the last moment. I think it’s his way of laughing at nature, while the rest of us cower before it. He says, to no one in particular, “So, what is the news?”
I know that isn’t directed at me. I spend most of my free time alone, so I don’t ever hear any news. But formation is the time to catch up on the latest gossip. Burbur, in space four, who is one of the most respected royal servants, says that she heard the king coughing in his sleep while making her normal rounds in the palace. Tiam raises an eyebrow, and everyone murmurs, “Ah, really?” Finn, a fisherman, whispers that the food brought in during this morning’s harvest was “pitiful,” and people shake their heads and say, “Is that so?” This goes on for a moment as I wonder whether or not to submit the only piece of information I have gleaned in the past hundred tides. Finally I clear my throat.
Tiam and …
Nichola Reilly is Cyn Balog’spost-apocalyptic fantasy-writing alter-ego. The first book in her series, DROWNED, will be releasing from Harlequin TEEN sometime in 2014, followed by a sequel, BURIED, in 2015.
About Cyn Balog: Cyn Balog is a normal, everyday Jersey Girl who always believed magical things can happen to us when we least expect them. She is author of young adult paranormal novels; FAIRY TALE (2009), SLEEPLESS (2010), STARSTRUCK (2011), TOUCHED (2012), and her most recent release: DEAD RIVER (2013).e. She lives outside Allentown, Pennsylvania with her husband and daughters. She also writes under the pen name Nichola Reilly. Nichola Reilly is Cyn Balog’s post-apocalyptic fantasy-writing alter-ego. The first book in her series, DROWNED, will be releasing from Harlequin TEEN sometime in 2014, followed by a sequel, BURIED, in 2015.
Drowned is one of those books I find hard to put my thoughts into words since I feel deeply divided by it. The story is both intriguing and brilliant, but thing is, I did not get carried away right from the beginning, nor did it keep me completely enthralled. I felt as if the plot was lacking something although the book was totally unputdownable.
Coe, the main character in Drowned, turned out to be one of the most fascinating and unique main characters that has ever existed in YA literature. I am not quite sure if I was avoiding the fact unknowingly or if I was just too tired to realize it when I read the book blurb and saw the cover of Drowned, but Coe is actually deformed. The handicapped kind of deformed. So if you are expecting a whiny and weepy heroine — ha, not a bit of it! Quite the contrary, being one of the few people on the island who still believes in the benevolence of the king who rarely comes out of his castle but instead, chooses to decide to reside in it (which is very selfish considering the fact that he even does so during the tides, which kill more and more people), Coe Kettlefish turns out to be a considerate and caring character (and I’m not saying it out of pity!). Due to her partial disability, Coe leads the most miserable life on the island. Destined to spend her time cleaning the craphouse, she know she will only have a short life on the isolated island. I really liked her cynical voice, but suprisingly, the scenes where she is actually pathetic, I never really felt annoyed, but instead, I think I kind of understood her. I do have to admit though, that I was a little bit shocked at first when finding out she lost one hand when she was younger because there are rarely handicapped heroes in YA books, so kudos to Nichola Reilly for creating such a unique and twisted character.
Anyway, you can really see how Coe “grows” throughout the story. She is described as a trusting character at the beginning of the book, especially when it comes down to the king since her father – who she totally idolizes – has never questioned his authority, either. However, she is never that type of person who needs to depend on other people. Together with Tiam, she slowly finds out that the king is hiding something, which might be the island’s redemption (whoa, that sounds way more dramatic than I intended it to be).
I still feel so-so about the secondary characters. Princess Star was a character I found really hard to get psyched out. You see, being King Wallow’s daughter, she has an almost divine status amongst the islanders. It is obvious that Coe envies her in many ways since Coe is black-haired and pink-eyed and not pale pink-skinned nor blond which is the ideal of beauty on the island. Well, truth is, Star is one of most obnoxious, spoiled, brainless, annoying and least lovely character I have EVER met. She is totally OUT OF PROPORTION WITH REALITY and I often just wanted to toss her into the water just so she could simply drown (funnily enough, she can swim but you will learn why). But waaait, despite all the turmoil amongst the islanders, she just continues to live her privileged life in her ivory tower which does not even change when her father is dying. And even when she shows some of her reasonable and “good” sides, for me, it just felt fake. There is some big reveal about her eventually, thus I have not lost all of my hopes on her yet.
Fern, on the other hand, who is also the youngest person on the person, was one of my favorite characters in the book. She is actually the person with whom Coe shares the fairy-tales she knows (people have forgotten about fairy-tales and books!) which, again, clearly gave Coe the opportunity to show her caring side.
Also, I really liked Tiam’s character. He’s got some great qualities, being funny, clever and protective of Coe. For my liking, however, he was just a little bit too smooth. You know that kind of people who have that charisma and just get along with all kind of people? Well, turns out he does have some nemeses but taken as a whole, he sticks as a too-gorgeous-to-be-real character in mind.
That being said, I do have to say that the worldbuilding was brilliant. I never got the feeling that the story lacked originality because the post-apocalyptic scenario Nichola Reilly created was just superb! I mean, just look at the societal system or social structure: People avoid any kind of attachement and prefer to fake disinterest, losing religion is something natural, love is something that has been buried in oblivion (they have forgotten how to kiss!!). Thus, the first kissing scene was awkwardly cute, but it is one of the most remarkable kisses EVER.
Anyway, it was hard to imagine that most parts of the world would be flooded one day, without any hope for escape. Yet, Nichola Reilly manages to capture the people’s fears, hopes but most importantly, indifference, perfectly. I mean, there are less than 500 people left who have survived so far and each day, more and more island citizens drown which means the population is gradually dying — but I never once felt like the story was overload. However, I often found myself groping in the dark (in a literal sense even) since the author tries to keep most parts of the story mysterious, but luckily, many questions are answered by the end of the book. Anyways, I am really glad where the story headed. I do hope, however, that we will get more background information in the next book. Eventually, I found myself flipping through the pages because I was TOTALLY caught off guard by those many twists by the end of the book. Really, the fantasy elements Nichola Reilly added to the story where just amazing!
Drowned is one of the weirdest books I have ever read. Due to the author’s pleasant writing style the book quickly turned out to be a real page-turner and I am craving to know how the story continues! I wished there would have been some kind of climax in the story although it clearly did not disturb the flow of reading. Overall, Drowned is a very fascinating fantasy read with an adorable heroine. This book is a perfect example of why I continue to go back to post-apocalyptic stories.